Pan Michael: An Historical Novel of Poland, the Ukraine, and Turkey — Edition Insights

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Sienkiewicz, Henryk, 1846-1916, Curtin, Jeremiah, 1835-1906 [Translator] Project Gutenberg 2011 Not confirmed
Historical fiction; Poland -- History -- Michael Wisniowiecki, 1669-1673 -- Fiction; Poland -- History -- 17th century -- Fiction; Michal Korybut Wisniowiecki, King of Poland, 1640-1673 -- Fiction Readers of public-domain and historical texts
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Text sections 68

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This editorial note examines the shifting narrative pace and voice in Sienkiewicz's historical novel, focusing on Azya's fiery rhetoric and the contrast with winter's stillness, as translated by Jeremiah Curtin.
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ita and Panna Aleksandra Billevich was celebrated, a cavalier, equally meritorious and famous in the Commonwealth, Pan Michael Volodyovski, colonel of the Lauda squadron, was to enter the bonds of marriage with Panna Anna Borzobogati Krasienski.

But notable hindrances rose, which delayed and put back the affair. The lady was a foster-daughter of Princess Griselda Vishnyevetski, without whose permission Panna Anna would in no wise consent to the wedding. Pan Michael was forced therefore to leave his affianced in Vodokty, by reason of the troubled times, and go alone to Zamost for the consent and the blessing of the princess.

But a favoring star did not guide him: he did not find the princess in Zamost; she had gone to the imperial court in Vienna for the education of her son. The persistent knight followed her even to Vienna, though that took much time. When he had arranged the affair there successfully, he turned homeward in confident hope.

He found troubled times at home: the army was forming a confederacy; in the Ukraine uprisings continued; at the eastern boundary the conflagration had not ceased. New forces were assembled to defend the frontiers even in some fashion. Before Pan Michael had reached Warsaw, he received a commission issued by the voevoda of Rus. Thinking that the country should be preferred at all times to private affairs, he relinquished his plan of immediate marriage and moved to the Ukraine. He campaigned in those regions some years, living in battles, in unspeakable hardships and labor, having barely a chance on occasions to send letters to the expectant lady.

Next he was envoy to the Crimea; then came the unfortunate civil war with Pan Lyubomirski, in which Volodyovski fought on the side of the king against that traitor and infamous man; then he went to the Ukraine a second time under Sobieski.

From these achievements the glory of his name increased in such manner that he was considered on all sides as the first soldier of the Commonwealth, but the years were passing for him in anxiety, sighs, and yearning. At last 1668 came, when he was sent at command of the castellan to rest; at the beginning of the year he went for the cherished lady, and taking her from Vodokty, they set out for Cracow.

They were journeying to Cracow, because Princess Griselda, who had returned from the dominions of the emperor, invited Pan Michael to have the marriage at that place, and offered herself to be mother to the bride.

The Kmitas remained at home, not thinking to receive early news from Pan Michael, and altogether intent on a new guest that was coming to Vodokty. Providence had till that time withheld from them children; now a change was impending, happy and in accordance with their wishes.

That year was surpassingly fruitful. Grain had given such a bountiful yield that the barns could not hold it, and the whole land, in the length and the breadth of it, was covered with stacks. In neighborhoods ravaged by war the young pine groves had grown in one spring more than in two years at other times. There was abundance of game and of mushrooms in the forests, as if the unusual fruitfulness of the earth had been extended to all things that lived on it. Hence the friends of Pan Michael drew happy omens for his marriage also, but the fates ordained otherwise.

On a certain beautiful day of autumn Pan Andrei Kmita was sitting under the shady roof of a summer-house and drinking his after-dinner mead; he gazed at his wife from time to time through the lattice, which was grown over with wild hops. Pani Kmita was walking on a neatly swept path in front of the summer-house. The lady was unusually stately; bright-haired, with a face serene, almost angelic. She walked slowly and carefully, for there was in her a fulness of dignity and blessing.

Pan Andrei gazed at her with intense love. When she moved, his look turned after her with such attachment as a dog shows his master with his eyes. At moments he smiled, for he was greatly rejoiced at sight of her, and he twirled his mustache upward. At such moments there appeared on his face a certain expression of glad frolicsomeness. It was clear that the soldier was fun-loving by nature, and in years of single life had played many a prank.

The narrative voice in Pan Michael shifts markedly between scenes of political scheming and descriptions of harsh winter stillness. In one passage, Azya delivers a boastful monologue, claiming to be “a second Hmelnitski” and “a lion,” his speech punctuated by physical gestures and the repeated exclamation “Allah kerim!” from his listener Halim. The translator, Jeremiah Curtin, preserves the rhythmic intensity of Azya's threats through short, parallel clauses and vivid imagery of “red light” in his eyes. Later, the prose slows to describe a “fierce winter” that “covered the forests with heavy snow-clusters,” transforming the landscape into “a single white plain.” These contrasting paces—urgent dialogue versus expansive description—create a dynamic reading experience.

Azya's Rhetorical Fire

Azya's speech in the excerpt is built on escalating boasts and conditional threats. He declares himself “better than Hmelnitski” and claims “in me a lion is dwelling,” then outlines a plan to either serve or destroy Lehistan. The repetition of “I am” and the list of actions—“beat the Cossacks, beat the Khan, and beat the Sultan”—build a rhythm of aggression. Curtin's translation captures this through short, punchy clauses and the use of “Allah kerim!” as a choral response from Halim, which underscores the dramatic tension. The scene ends with Azya whispering a violent contingency plan, his finger drawing across his neck, a gesture that condenses the threat into a single, chilling image.

Winter's Stillness as a Structural Pause

After the heated dialogue, the narrative abruptly shifts to a description of winter: “A fierce winter covered the forests with heavy snow-clusters and icicles, and filled ravines to their edges with drifts.” The language becomes expansive and static, emphasizing the transformation of the land into “a single white plain.” This passage functions as a structural pause, slowing the pace after the rapid-fire plotting. The contrast is stark: where Azya's scene is filled with movement, gestures, and whispered conspiracies, the winter scene is devoid of human action, focusing instead on the overwhelming presence of snow and cold. This juxtaposition highlights Sienkiewicz's control over narrative tempo.

Voice and Translation Choices

Jeremiah Curtin's translation preserves the orality of Azya's speech through exclamations and rhythmic repetition. Phrases like “Fate, fate, fate!” and the repeated “Allah kerim!” maintain a sense of spoken urgency. In contrast, the winter description uses longer, more measured sentences, with clauses linked by “and” to create a cumulative effect. Curtin also retains culturally specific terms such as “Lehistan” and “Allah kerim,” which anchor the dialogue in its setting. The translator's note in the front matter indicates his close involvement with the trilogy, and his choices here suggest an effort to balance fidelity to the Polish original with readability in English.

Readers attentive to shifts in pace will notice how Sienkiewicz alternates between compressed, dramatic dialogue and expansive, descriptive passages. The winter scene, for instance, offers a moment of stillness that contrasts with the conspiratorial energy of Azya's plotting. Paying attention to these changes in tempo can reveal how the novel builds tension and provides relief, especially in a work of over 200,000 words.

That winter stillness in Pan Michael stayed with me—how silence can feel heavier than speech, holding all the unsaid things. It reminded me of another quiet patience, the watchfulness before motion in Flying the Coast Skyways; Or, Jack Ralston's Swift Patrol — Story, Setting & Ideas. Both felt like waiting rooms where the calm itself promises something stirring just beyond.

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