The Blind Brother: A Story of the Pennsylvania Coal Mines — A Closer Reading

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Greene, Homer, 1853-1940 Project Gutenberg 2014 Not confirmed
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Homer Greene's 1887 novel uses the Pennsylvania coal mines as a setting for a story about a boy who must navigate moral dilemmas and legal trials to protect his blind brother. The author's choices in dialect, courtroom dialogue, and mine descriptions shape the narrative.
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The Dryden Mine, in the Susquehanna coal-fields of Pennsylvania, was worked out and abandoned long ago. To-day its headings and airways and chambers echo only to the occasional fall of loosened slate, or to the drip of water from the roof. Its pillars, robbed by retreating workmen, are crumbling and rusty, and those of its props which are still standing have become mouldy and rotten. The rats that once scampered through its galleries deserted it along with human kind, and its very name, from long disuse, has acquired an unaccustomed sound.

But twenty years ago there was no busier mine than the Dryden from Carbondale to Nanticoke. Two hundred and thirty men and boys went by the slope into it every morning, and came out from it every night. They were simple and unlearned, these men and boys, rugged and rude, rough and reckless at times, but manly, heroic, and kindhearted.

Up in the Lackawanna region a strike had been in progress for nearly two weeks. Efforts had been made by the strikers to persuade the miners down the valley to join them, but at first without success.

Then a committee of one hundred came down to appeal and to intimidate. In squads of ten or more they visited the mines in the region, and, in the course of their journeyings, had come to the Dryden Slope. They had induced the miners to go out at all the workings they had thus far entered, and were no less successful here. It required persuasion, sometimes threats, sometimes, indeed, even blows, for the miners in Dryden Slope had no cause of complaint against their employers; they earned good wages, and were content.

But, twenty years ago, miners who kept at work against the wishes of their fellows while a strike was in progress, were called “black-legs,” were treated with contempt, waylaid and beaten, and sometimes killed.

So the men in the Dryden Mine yielded; and soon, down the chambers and along the headings, toward the foot of the slope, came little groups, with dinner-pails and tools, discussing earnestly, often bitterly, the situation and the prospect.

The members of a party of fifteen or twenty, that came down the airway from the tier of chambers on the new north heading, were holding an especially animated conversation. Fully one-half of the men were visiting strikers. They were all walking, in single file, along the route by which the mine-cars went.

For some distance from the new chambers the car-track was laid in the airway; then it turned down through an entrance into the heading, and from that point followed the heading to the foot of the slope. Where the route crossed from the airway to the heading, the space between the pillars had been carefully boarded across, so that the air current should not be turned aside; and a door had been placed in the boarding, to be opened whenever the cars approached, and shut as soon as they had passed by.

That door was attended by a boy.

To this point the party had now come, and one by one filed through the opening, while Bennie, the door-boy, stood holding back the door to let them pass.

“Ho, Jack, tak’ the door-boy wi’ ye!” shouted some one in the rear.

The great, broad-shouldered, rough-bearded man who led the procession turned back to where Bennie, apparently lost in astonishment at this unusual occurrence, still stood, with his hand on the door.

“Come along, lad!” he said; “come along! Ye’ll have a gret play-spell noo.”

“I can’t leave the door, sir,” answered Bennie. “The cars’ll be comin’ soon.”

“Ye need na min’ the cars. Come along wi’ ye, I say!”

“But I can’t go till Tom comes, anyway, you know.”

The man came a step closer. He had the frame of a giant. The others who passed by were like children beside him. Then one of the men who worked in the mine, and who knew Bennie, came through the doorway, the last in the group, and said,--

“Don’t hurt the boy; let him alone. His brother’ll take him out; he always does.”

All this time Bennie stood quite still, with his hand on the door, never turning his head.

It was a strange thing for a boy to stand motionless like that, and look neither to the right nor the left, while an excited group of men passed by, one of whom had stopped and approached him, as if he meant him harm. It roused the curiosity of “Jack the Giant,” as the miners called him, and, plucking his lamp from his cap, he flashed the light of it up into Bennie’s face.

Homer Greene's The Blind Brother opens with a description of the Dryden Mine as a place where 'its headings and airways and chambers echo only to the occasional fall of loosened slate, or to the drip of water from the roof.' This attention to the physical details of the mine—its crumbling pillars and mouldy props—establishes a setting that is both specific and atmospheric. The novel, originally serialized in The Youth's Companion, won a $1,500 prize in 1886, and its language reflects a careful balance between regional authenticity and narrative clarity.

Dialect and Diction in the Courtroom

Greene renders the speech of his working-class characters with a phonetic dialect that marks their social position. Tom, the protagonist, speaks in a vernacular that includes contractions like 'an'' for 'and' and phrases such as 'I can’t swear that it was' and 'I was s’prised like.' This choice is not merely decorative; it creates a contrast with the formal language of the lawyers and judge. When Tom testifies, his halting, breathless delivery—'An’ I run, an’ I didn’t look back'—conveys both his fear and his honesty. The author uses this linguistic divide to underscore the tension between the boy's moral simplicity and the legal system's procedural complexity.

The Mine as a Character

The mine is not just a backdrop but a presence that shapes the action. Greene describes it in terms of decay: 'its pillars, robbed by retreating workmen, are crumbling and rusty.' The language of abandonment—'the rats that once scampered through its galleries deserted it'—gives the mine a history of its own. This attention to the physical environment extends to the loading-place and the dark hillside where Tom overhears the arsonist. The setting is rendered with enough specificity to ground the plot, yet it also serves as a source of danger and moral testing.

Moral Weight in Dialogue

Greene's dialogue often carries the burden of the novel's ethical concerns. When Tom returns the money given to him, he says, 'Cause I had no right to it, an’ he knows who it belongs to.' This simple statement, stripped of legal jargon, reveals his integrity. The courtroom exchanges are structured to highlight the conflict between truth and legal strategy. The judge's abrupt 'The objection is sustained' and Pleadwell's procedural maneuvers show how the law can obscure justice. Greene uses these exchanges to explore the gap between what is legally permissible and what is morally right.

Narrative Structure and Suspense

The novel's eight chapters move from a mine accident to a trial, a fall, and a recovery. Greene builds suspense through careful pacing, as in the trial scene where Tom's testimony is interrupted by objections. The reader learns the full story only gradually, through Tom's reluctant admissions. The author also uses physical details—the 'blaze start up right where he come from'—to create vivid moments of crisis. This structure, typical of serialized fiction, keeps the plot moving while allowing for moments of reflection on the characters' choices.

Readers attentive to Greene's use of dialect and setting will find a story that uses its mining backdrop not just for local color but as a crucible for character. The novel's courtroom scenes reward close reading for how they stage the tension between spoken truth and legal form. The Blind Brother offers a specific, grounded look at how one author handled the demands of prize-winning serial fiction in the late nineteenth century.

There’s a particular ache in The Blind Brother—the way the mine’s dark corridors echo the boy’s own groping moral path. That same quiet pull, the sense of a river guiding someone who can’t quite see ahead, stayed with me long after. It surfaced again, softer yet familiar, while reading The Lure of the Mississippi — A Reader’s Guide, almost as if the water remembered the coal dust.

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